Post by korimamodo on Dec 4, 2005 20:35:21 GMT -5
This is my own story.. blah blah blah.. I only have one chapter and need improvements, don't push it, here is their profile(s)
Name: Kayra
race: mamodo
Powers: Physic kenetic abilities (Teleportation, freezing time, unbreakable forcefields, levetation, mindreading), sound attacks, and stealth at a fast rate... did I forget is awsome in every sport?
gender: female
age: 11
appearance: light navy hair, light blue eyes, blue blouse over slate blue longsleeve, slate blue miniskirt with light blue lines on the sides, and light blue boots.
description: twin sister of Zako, shy girl, athletic, plays flute, loves snowboarding, shy, 2 minutes younger than Zako, loves to draw, and has phycic abilities
spells:
Murunsica: music like aurora comes out of mouth
Mezzopurun: focuses Kara's mind to create music that throws oponent off balance
Mezzofrote: sonic scream cancels out Mamodos' attack
purun: bells appear and shield Kayra from attack while playing to Jingle Bells
frote: flute appears and destracts opponent when played
Piranisama: Hypnotizes people to the sound of Kayra's flute
Partner Name: Clara
gender: female
race: human
age: 13
appearance: light blue blouse with words: Love For Music, short ebony(or raven or black) hair, indigo jeans
description: Clara is a new girl who had just moved to town, but is hated because of her multi-talents. Her mother was murdered by Zeno and Dufort (her dad the day she was born) and stays with Kayra's sister and her partner, Elli
Name: Zako
Powers: Love, affection, bonds
Gender: Female
Partner: Elli
Book color: Rose Pink
Appearance:hot pink eyes, Dark pink short hair, white blouse with dark pink heart, dark pink miniskirt, and darkpink boots
Description: Zako's shy, but once you get to know her, you find out that she's adventurous, a little hyper, determined, and plays matchmaker once in awhile...
Zano: Pink hearted aurora come's out of Zako's mouth
Mishu Shield: heartshaped shield appears and reflects attacks back
Maru Zino: Spells change into another mamodo's spells that Zako and Elli are bonded to.
Mazin: A pink red bird in pink aurora with heart shaped wing squeezes oponent to death and it inables them to attack
Vali tera: A pink heart shaped black hole distracts the opponent with his greatest desire
Misla Tell: Zako gathers power from loved ones, making a large heart shaped attack that attacks from the ground
heres the story:
Flashback
7 year old girl: Mom! Mom!
Mom: Clara... I am sorry. It's time for me to die.. *dies in puddle of blood*
Clara: No! Mom!! *starts crying*
Clara's mom: *starts swifting away*
Clara: Mom! Come back! Come back!Please! You're the only one I have left!
faint voice of Clara's mom: It's time to let go, little one...
13 year old Clara: NO!!! *wakes up panting* it.. was another dream... *gets out of bed* yawn! stupid dream. It's been 5 years. I WILL kill whoever murdered her.
14 year old girl: *comes into room* Clara, you okay?
Clara: Yeah, Elli. Are you sure it's okay that I stay with you?
Elli: *giggles* for the last time in 5 years, Clara, yes. Now c'mon, we don't wanna be late for our first day of school here.
Clara: *smiles* yeah....
later...
Teacher: Hello class, we have two new students. Meet Elli Ninova and Clara Krana.
Clara: Hi, nice to meet you!
Elli: Hope we can be friends.
Kiyo: New students, huh?
Zatch: Yay! New friends!
Teacher: okay, now take your seats so we can have our class.
later after school
Elli: So is there nething different in this dream then the others?
Clara: Well.. now that you mention it... there was this navy book I found.It's pretty hard to explain...
Elli: *stops walking* did you say navy book?
Clara: Yeah.. why?
Elli: Well, you're not gonna believe this, but you know that was the day I found you?
Clara: Yeah, the day my mother died...
Elli: Well that same day, I found a pink----*lightening strikes her and clara.*
Clara: What the! ow, what's going on?
Zeno: Hmph, at last, some suckers to cause some chaos to...
Dufort: Seriously, this is gonna be fun. Zaker!
blue haired girl: *creates forcefield around Clara and Elli*
Clara: Huh? What's going on?
Pink haired girl: Hi, nice to meet you, my name is Zako, this is Kayra!
Kayra: Um.. hi...
Clara: Thanks for saving us.
Elli: yeah. *looks on ground and sees pink book* hey, I've seen this book before...Zano...
Clara: Hey, this is the navy book I found in my dream... murunsica...
Kayra: *shoots out musical like aurora against Zeno*
Zako: *shoots out heart like aurora against Zeno*
Zeno and dufort: *blast away*
Dufort: We're blasting off again!!!!
Zeno: You need to watch less pokemon..
Dufort: Shutup...
Clara: What just happened???
Elli: I don't know...
Zako: You know, it's a shame they don't recognize us...
Kayra: You can say that again...
Clara: wait.. Now I remember.. you were the little puppy that led me to Elli?
Elli: You were the kitty?
Kayra: Woof woof....
Zako: Meow...
Clara: Yeah.. but what's with blue guy over there?
Kayra: There's this battle to become king of a place called the mamodo world.
Zako: Every thousand years, 100 mamodo children are sent to earth and find human partners
Kayra: To read the spell books like the ones you're holding right now.
Zako: We need to burn other spell books and try to become king, it's really dangerous, but it's your decision to accept it.
Clara: Hm.. I'll accept
Elli: I will too.
Kayra: Really? Even though it's dangerous?
Clara: Yeah, you led me to Elli and without her, I'd be living on the streets
Elli: And I would still be lonely.
Kayra/Zako: *smile at eachother*
should I make more??? I am accepting mamodos blah blah blah.. you get the idea...
this is my first chapter, so I'lll make more after I get a rating
Name: Kayra
race: mamodo
Powers: Physic kenetic abilities (Teleportation, freezing time, unbreakable forcefields, levetation, mindreading), sound attacks, and stealth at a fast rate... did I forget is awsome in every sport?
gender: female
age: 11
appearance: light navy hair, light blue eyes, blue blouse over slate blue longsleeve, slate blue miniskirt with light blue lines on the sides, and light blue boots.
description: twin sister of Zako, shy girl, athletic, plays flute, loves snowboarding, shy, 2 minutes younger than Zako, loves to draw, and has phycic abilities
spells:
Murunsica: music like aurora comes out of mouth
Mezzopurun: focuses Kara's mind to create music that throws oponent off balance
Mezzofrote: sonic scream cancels out Mamodos' attack
purun: bells appear and shield Kayra from attack while playing to Jingle Bells
frote: flute appears and destracts opponent when played
Piranisama: Hypnotizes people to the sound of Kayra's flute
Partner Name: Clara
gender: female
race: human
age: 13
appearance: light blue blouse with words: Love For Music, short ebony(or raven or black) hair, indigo jeans
description: Clara is a new girl who had just moved to town, but is hated because of her multi-talents. Her mother was murdered by Zeno and Dufort (her dad the day she was born) and stays with Kayra's sister and her partner, Elli
Name: Zako
Powers: Love, affection, bonds
Gender: Female
Partner: Elli
Book color: Rose Pink
Appearance:hot pink eyes, Dark pink short hair, white blouse with dark pink heart, dark pink miniskirt, and darkpink boots
Description: Zako's shy, but once you get to know her, you find out that she's adventurous, a little hyper, determined, and plays matchmaker once in awhile...
Zano: Pink hearted aurora come's out of Zako's mouth
Mishu Shield: heartshaped shield appears and reflects attacks back
Maru Zino: Spells change into another mamodo's spells that Zako and Elli are bonded to.
Mazin: A pink red bird in pink aurora with heart shaped wing squeezes oponent to death and it inables them to attack
Vali tera: A pink heart shaped black hole distracts the opponent with his greatest desire
Misla Tell: Zako gathers power from loved ones, making a large heart shaped attack that attacks from the ground
heres the story:
Flashback
7 year old girl: Mom! Mom!
Mom: Clara... I am sorry. It's time for me to die.. *dies in puddle of blood*
Clara: No! Mom!! *starts crying*
Clara's mom: *starts swifting away*
Clara: Mom! Come back! Come back!Please! You're the only one I have left!
faint voice of Clara's mom: It's time to let go, little one...
13 year old Clara: NO!!! *wakes up panting* it.. was another dream... *gets out of bed* yawn! stupid dream. It's been 5 years. I WILL kill whoever murdered her.
14 year old girl: *comes into room* Clara, you okay?
Clara: Yeah, Elli. Are you sure it's okay that I stay with you?
Elli: *giggles* for the last time in 5 years, Clara, yes. Now c'mon, we don't wanna be late for our first day of school here.
Clara: *smiles* yeah....
later...
Teacher: Hello class, we have two new students. Meet Elli Ninova and Clara Krana.
Clara: Hi, nice to meet you!
Elli: Hope we can be friends.
Kiyo: New students, huh?
Zatch: Yay! New friends!
Teacher: okay, now take your seats so we can have our class.
later after school
Elli: So is there nething different in this dream then the others?
Clara: Well.. now that you mention it... there was this navy book I found.It's pretty hard to explain...
Elli: *stops walking* did you say navy book?
Clara: Yeah.. why?
Elli: Well, you're not gonna believe this, but you know that was the day I found you?
Clara: Yeah, the day my mother died...
Elli: Well that same day, I found a pink----*lightening strikes her and clara.*
Clara: What the! ow, what's going on?
Zeno: Hmph, at last, some suckers to cause some chaos to...
Dufort: Seriously, this is gonna be fun. Zaker!
blue haired girl: *creates forcefield around Clara and Elli*
Clara: Huh? What's going on?
Pink haired girl: Hi, nice to meet you, my name is Zako, this is Kayra!
Kayra: Um.. hi...
Clara: Thanks for saving us.
Elli: yeah. *looks on ground and sees pink book* hey, I've seen this book before...Zano...
Clara: Hey, this is the navy book I found in my dream... murunsica...
Kayra: *shoots out musical like aurora against Zeno*
Zako: *shoots out heart like aurora against Zeno*
Zeno and dufort: *blast away*
Dufort: We're blasting off again!!!!
Zeno: You need to watch less pokemon..
Dufort: Shutup...
Clara: What just happened???
Elli: I don't know...
Zako: You know, it's a shame they don't recognize us...
Kayra: You can say that again...
Clara: wait.. Now I remember.. you were the little puppy that led me to Elli?
Elli: You were the kitty?
Kayra: Woof woof....
Zako: Meow...
Clara: Yeah.. but what's with blue guy over there?
Kayra: There's this battle to become king of a place called the mamodo world.
Zako: Every thousand years, 100 mamodo children are sent to earth and find human partners
Kayra: To read the spell books like the ones you're holding right now.
Zako: We need to burn other spell books and try to become king, it's really dangerous, but it's your decision to accept it.
Clara: Hm.. I'll accept
Elli: I will too.
Kayra: Really? Even though it's dangerous?
Clara: Yeah, you led me to Elli and without her, I'd be living on the streets
Elli: And I would still be lonely.
Kayra/Zako: *smile at eachother*
should I make more??? I am accepting mamodos blah blah blah.. you get the idea...
this is my first chapter, so I'lll make more after I get a rating